My ears!
My biggest complaint regards your audio levels. You need to normalize them. You have your music loud and the dialogue a LOT softer.
My ears!
My biggest complaint regards your audio levels. You need to normalize them. You have your music loud and the dialogue a LOT softer.
Um...
I do not wish to be so blantant, but, what exactly is this? There is little story and the concept suggested by the title does not fit with the animation. Therfore, I am confused.
However, I enjoyed the animation. Kudos for that.
The title's not supposed to make sense.
Um... WTF?
I have to completely agree with CaptAcid, for this does seem much to slow and much to abrupt. The artstyle was not of my taste, but I tolerated it. The jokes were stale and not delivered well, and there was very little engagement.
I quote CaptAcid, for his review, I believe, suits the animation well:
"Seems to try and be edgy, but honestly the concept was pretty thin save for the artstyle. I mean, while it was somewhat interesting because of the art, I kept waiting for it to...speed up. Then it ends abruptly, like the author became bored with his own subject. Poor Sonic. It would have been interesting to see more of this strange world, if nothing else than to justify this strange sonic's existance. Felt like I could have enjoyed it more if it had actually gone ahead with some kind of confrontation with the seemingly randomly named villian."
As for not favoring it when Egoraptor does, well, I love Newgrounds, I idolize Egoraptor by far, but this I find to be distasteful. I want to see something faster, cleaner, more engaging, and FAR less abrupt. However, I do seem to be over ruled with all the 10's I see, but this is my opinion.
You ass!
You Rock Roll'd us! :(
Lol. My only complaint is that everyone looked Mexican. The skin pallete could've been more suitable. (Not that I'm racist, just that everyone in it is caucasian)
I definitely enjoyed seeing the various parodies within it.
Graphics: 3/4
Story: 3/4
Interactivity: N/A
Music Volume: 4/4
Vocal Volume: 3/4
Humor: 3/4
What?
Going by your Author Comment, there's apparently a story to this. I do not see it at all. The only interaction I shared with this is an ever-so-slight impression of graphics, and even then they could have been better.
However, I do see potential in this through the animation you have expressed and through your graphics capabilities. I would like to see you produce something greater than this, but for now, I can only offer a low score.
Story: 1/10
Interactivity: 2/10
Graphics: 5/10
Animation: 5/10
Length: 1/10
Total: 14/50
Eh, I gave up this project awhile ago, I did however do a major improvement in graphics, Major remake of this shit. then i got bored of flash.
LMAO!
UMBRELLA-O'S!
Lol. It's cute and unexpected. Follows the trailer well. The animation suits the style and the music is not overdramatic.
Nice name for the cereal I like it lol.
Thanks.
And now, a useless comment from Nickel.
I'd tap Lisa.
I'm jealous.
I live in Vancouver, Washington, USA.
Our Vancouver is no where near that.
Damn...
...We still have your fort. :3
The animation was very beautiful. It was calm, smooth, and set to some gentle music. Created a wonderful atmosphere. Makes me wonder what a flash on Vancouver, USA would be like. o_0
Forget my comment on Alfred Christ
All of this is visual rape. Holy hell, I feel like I'm tripping out when I watch each one. @_@
...Was I just visually raped?
Interesting combination of old animation, new animation, religion, and parodies.
VERY fast paced, though. There could also be improvement overall, such as a preloader instead of looping it.
Good job.
I am a graduate of Vancouver School of Arts & Academics, class of '10. I am an active student learning theatre, technical theatre, film and animation, recording arts and technology, music, and photography.
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